A truck sounds like tuff tuff

[Arnie2k9]

Word sagt es sind 334 Ansehen ?

Ja vergessen zu aktualisieren^^ also 70 wörter noch sagen wir 50 dasn würd mir auch reichen 10 % toleranz Ansehen ?

[Etern1ty]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is, that our technology level increases daily, so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, wich have maybe just one person, who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy. Machines are believed to be safer, because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history/past. As example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and this could have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is, that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast, because the trucks can communicate together and always know whats happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So its just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drives on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week, which increases the productivity immensely. These programs minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.

Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is also (also würde ich streichen) the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows, when alternative fuels are ready for trucks. So maybe the firms will start to use an airplane to transport their goods for long distance and for the short distance there will be the trucks, but no longer for long distances like nowadays(Irgendwie unsinnig, weil heute eh schon Flugzeuge genutzt werden und die brauchen auch Kerosin, was auch knapp wird. Züge also Bahn mit Strom wäre sinniger).
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.


So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future, but it will happen.

So hab mal grob meine Ideen reingebracht

[r.gore]

Also irgendwie muss ich bei dem Text an Terminator denken Ansehen ?

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie:

Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is also the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage.

Die Antriebsarten unserer Fahrzeuge werden sich in Zukunft auch verändern, weg vom Öl.

Ist aber schwierig deine Arbeit, da kein Zeitrahmen vorgegeben ist.

[Etern1ty]

Ja das habe ich auch mal kurz angeschnitten, weil ja keiner weiss, wann und was es sein wird.

[Arnie2k9]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which have maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.

Aktuelle Version mit 384 Wörter
und den Veränderungen von Eternity


Also aufgabenstellung lautet:
What job will disappear in the future^^

[mcselede]

Irgendwie habe ich das Gefühl, Deine Hausaufgaben machen zu müssen:

What job maybe disappear in the future

In my opinion the job of a truck driver will disappear in future. In fact there are some reason why this could be. On one hand the technology level increases day by day, so there will be computer controlled self driving trucks one day.

...

and so on.

Sorry, aber ich kann jetzt echt nicht Deine Hausaufgaben machen

[Etern1ty]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which have maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks via remote control. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy what is a very important point, since the very big business competiotion between the different forwarding agencies requires a high productivity with low costs. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.

blablabla

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie: Jetzt kannste noch hinzufügen das die aktuellen Daten zwar eine Zunahme des Schwerlastverkehrs voraussagen, das du aber für deine Arbeit andere Zeitdimensionen zugrunde gelegt hast und natürlich aus globaler Sicht unserer Zukunft schreibst. Ansehen ?

Das ganze in Englisch und dein Aufsatz ist fertig. Ansehen ?

[Arnie2k9]

So ich glaub das reicht.
Danke euch allen für die Hilfe vor allem Eternity, gib mir die Nummer deiner Lehrerin ich regal dass du ne 15 bekommst^^

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie: Kannst ja mal eine Rückmeldung geben wie deine Arbeit abgeschnitten hat.

[Arnie2k9]

@Arnie: Kannst ja mal eine Rückmeldung geben wie deine Arbeit abgeschnitten hat.

Mach ich gerne wird aber ein wenig dauern.

[Shinor]

wenn du die Wörter auseinander schreibst gibts mehr Wörter Ansehen ? I am = 2 I'm = 1 Ansehen ?

[danni84]

wenn du die Wörter auseinander schreibst gibts mehr Wörter Ansehen ? I am = 2 I'm = 1 Ansehen ?

Kommt auf den Dozenten an, inner Schule zählte Iam, We are etc immer als 1 Wort

[Arnie2k9]

Finale Version:

What jobs will disappear

In my opinion the job of a trucker will disappear in the future. In fact there are some reason why this could be. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which are supervised by maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks via remote control. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy what is a very important point, since the very big business competition between the different forwarding agencies requires a high productivity with low costs. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a severe car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the congestions caused by trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.