A truck sounds like tuff tuff

[Arnie2k9]

Hi Leutz, ich muss für meinen englisch Sprachkurs eine "Opinion" schreiben welcher job eventuell in Zukunft verschwinden wird, ich nahm Trucker....dachte anfangs yeah ich find tausende Gründe....naja hab mich geirrt, das ding muss 400 Wörter haben ich bin grad bei 310^^.
Habt ihr vielleicht noch paar Ideen und am besten noch Verbesserungsvorschläge?


What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be self driving trucks with maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and care about a lot of trucks. So a company needs just to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of trucker. Machines are believed to be safer, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a big car accident. With these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drives on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days which increases the productivity immensely. These programs minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.

Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is also the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage. So maybe the firms will start to use an airplane to transport their goods for long distance and for the short distance there will be the trucks, but no longer for long distances like nowadays.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to be one is getting smaller and smaller.


So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.

[bballpro]

there’re
weiß nicht wie's bei euch ist, aber die meisten lehrer sehen sowas nicht gern. also nicht zu faul sein. :motz1:

[Etern1ty]

Ist bei uns kein Problem, wird sogar eher so geschrieben.

[Arnie2k9]

Das ist nicht das Prob^^
Wir sind Studenten wir sind faul:icon_aaargh:

[danni84]

few days free time to spend their time with
hier würd ich das "their time" rauslassen ;-)

[Arnie2k9]

hier würd ich das "their time" rauslassen ;-)

Du bist kontraproduktiv ich verliere Wörter dadurch :lol:

Check erledigt:!:

[mcselede]

Im allgemeinen schreibt man im englischen aus, also I am, we are and so on.
Lediglich bei Zitaten einer mündlichen Rede werden Abkürzungen verwendet.

Ansonsten eher mal versuchen das typisch deutsche weg zu lassen, also Schachtelsätze, Füllwörter etc.

[Arnie2k9]

Im allgemeinen schreibt man im englischen aus, also I am, we are and so on.
Lediglich bei Zitaten einer mündlichen Rede werden Abkürzungen verwendet.

Ansonsten eher mal versuchen das typisch deutsche weg zu lassen, also Schachtelsätze, Füllwörter etc.
ok dann änder ich das, mir solls recht sein, gibt mehr Wörter^^
Was meinst du mit dme typisch deutschen?

[mcselede]

It is allways a pleasure to help my German mates to impove ther English skills.

[oldiegerd]

Die Prognose bis 2025 laut Wirtschaftsteil in der Hannoverschen Allgemeine Zeitung der vergangenen Woche: Zunahme des Schwerlastverkehrs bis 2025 um 25 %.

Aktuelle Daten: Bundesministerium für Verkehr (Links und Bilder sind den registrierten Mitgliedern des Muskelbody Bodybuilding Forums vorbehalten. Zumindest hier in Deutschland ist der Beruf des Truckers ein Beruf mit Zukunft.
Ich sehe auch noch keine vergleichbare Alternative Waren zu transportieren.

[Arnie2k9]

Die Prognose bis 2025 laut Wirtschaftsteil in der Hannoverschen Allgemeine Zeitung der vergangenen Woche: Zunahme des Schwerlastverkehrs bis 2025 um 25 %.

Aktuelle Daten: Bundesministerium für Verkehr (Links und Bilder sind den registrierten Mitgliedern des Muskelbody Bodybuilding Forums vorbehalten. Zumindest hier in Deutschland ist der Beruf des Truckers ein Beruf mit Zukunft.
Ich sehe auch noch keine vergleichbare Alternative Waren zu transportieren.

Zeig das bitte bloß nicht meiner Dozentin:lol:

[danni84]

Prognose bis 2025
ich weiß auch nicht genau um welche zeitspanne es in der Aufgabenstellung geht, "future" ist ja nicht grade genau^^ :ratlos:

[ependinom]

aus fehlenden 90 woertern werden 400 und gesucht wird jetzt auch ein neues thema :P

[danni84]

aus fehlenden 90 woertern werden 400 und gesucht wird jetzt auch ein neues thema :P
Word sagt es sind 334, also fehlen zur Zeit nur 66 :mrgreen:

[oldiegerd]

@danni: Stimmt. Besser ist immer ein Zeitrahmen.

[Arnie2k9]

Word sagt es sind 334 :mrgreen:

Ja vergessen zu aktualisieren^^ also 70 wörter noch sagen wir 50 dasn würd mir auch reichen 10 % toleranz :lol:

[Etern1ty]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is, that our technology level increases daily, so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, wich have maybe just one person, who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy. Machines are believed to be safer, because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history/past. As example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and this could have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is, that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast, because the trucks can communicate together and always know whats happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So its just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drives on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week, which increases the productivity immensely. These programs minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.

Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is also (also würde ich streichen) the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows, when alternative fuels are ready for trucks. So maybe the firms will start to use an airplane to transport their goods for long distance and for the short distance there will be the trucks, but no longer for long distances like nowadays(Irgendwie unsinnig, weil heute eh schon Flugzeuge genutzt werden und die brauchen auch Kerosin, was auch knapp wird. Züge also Bahn mit Strom wäre sinniger).
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.


So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future, but it will happen.

So hab mal grob meine Ideen reingebracht

[r.gore]

Also irgendwie muss ich bei dem Text an Terminator denken :)

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie:
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is also the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage.

Die Antriebsarten unserer Fahrzeuge werden sich in Zukunft auch verändern, weg vom Öl.

Ist aber schwierig deine Arbeit, da kein Zeitrahmen vorgegeben ist.

[Etern1ty]

Ja das habe ich auch mal kurz angeschnitten, weil ja keiner weiss, wann und was es sein wird.

[Arnie2k9]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which have maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.


Aktuelle Version mit 384 Wörter
und den Veränderungen von Eternity


Also aufgabenstellung lautet:
What job will disappear in the future^^

[mcselede]

Irgendwie habe ich das Gefühl, Deine Hausaufgaben machen zu müssen:


What job maybe disappear in the future

In my opinion the job of a truck driver will disappear in future. In fact there are some reason why this could be. On one hand the technology level increases day by day, so there will be computer controlled self driving trucks one day.

...

and so on.

Sorry, aber ich kann jetzt echt nicht Deine Hausaufgaben machen

[Etern1ty]

What jobs will disappear

In future the job of a trucker will disappear. In fact there are many reasons why this will happen. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which have maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks via remote control. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy what is a very important point, since the very big business competiotion between the different forwarding agencies requires a high productivity with low costs. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a big car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the happening of congestions because of trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just a few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.


blablabla

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie: Jetzt kannste noch hinzufügen das die aktuellen Daten zwar eine Zunahme des Schwerlastverkehrs voraussagen, das du aber für deine Arbeit andere Zeitdimensionen zugrunde gelegt hast und natürlich aus globaler Sicht unserer Zukunft schreibst. :D

Das ganze in Englisch und dein Aufsatz ist fertig. :D

[Arnie2k9]

So ich glaub das reicht.
Danke euch allen für die Hilfe vor allem Eternity, gib mir die Nummer deiner Lehrerin ich regal dass du ne 15 bekommst^^

[oldiegerd]

@Arnie: Kannst ja mal eine Rückmeldung geben wie deine Arbeit abgeschnitten hat.

[Arnie2k9]

@Arnie: Kannst ja mal eine Rückmeldung geben wie deine Arbeit abgeschnitten hat.

Mach ich gerne wird aber ein wenig dauern.

[Shinor]

wenn du die Wörter auseinander schreibst gibts mehr Wörter ;) I am = 2 I'm = 1 :)

[danni84]

wenn du die Wörter auseinander schreibst gibts mehr Wörter ;) I am = 2 I'm = 1 :)
Kommt auf den Dozenten an, inner Schule zählte Iam, We are etc immer als 1 Wort

[Arnie2k9]

Finale Version:

What jobs will disappear

In my opinion the job of a trucker will disappear in the future. In fact there are some reason why this could be. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which are supervised by maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks via remote control. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy what is a very important point, since the very big business competition between the different forwarding agencies requires a high productivity with low costs. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, as example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fell asleep momentarily and will have serious consequences like a severe car accident. The next point is that with these machines it is possible to program them that they will drive with maybe just a meter gap and also the ability to drive very fast caused of the trucks can communicate together and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drive on the street so there are lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be able to minimize the congestions caused by trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks.
Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.

[WomanOrMachine]

aus fehlenden 90 woertern werden 400 und gesucht wird jetzt auch ein neues thema :P

:jumpers:

[Etern1ty]

What jobs will disappear

In my opinion the job of a trucker will disappear in the future. In fact there are some reason why this could be. The first thing is that our technology level increases daily so in the future there will be computer controlled self driving trucks, which are
supervised by maybe just one person who sits in a surveillance room and takes care about a lot of trucks via remote control. So a company just needs to pay for one guard instead of paying a whole group of truckers, what highly increases the economy what is a very important point, since the very big business competition between the different forwarding agencies requires a high productivity with low costs. Machines are believed to be safer because they always make the right decisions, so human errors are history, for example a driver who drives the whole night without sleep will get in danger to fall asleep momentarily and a scenario like this can have serious consequences like a severe car accident. The next point is that it will be possible to program these machines, so that they can drive with maybe just a meter gap with a simultaneously very high speed caused by the ability of the?(hier vielleicht eine abwechslung zu the) trucks can communicate among each other and always know what’s happening before and behind them. This fact causes, that all trucks react exactly at the same time and crashes get prevented, even with this very little safety distance. So it’s just like a train with the simple difference that this „train“ drives on the street so there are a lot more ways to drive to the destination. The “truck trains” will be able to drive twenty-four hours on seven days a week which increases the productivity immensely. These programs will be capable to minimize the congestions caused by trucks tremendously.
Another reason for the disappearing of the truckers is the shortage of the oil recourses of our earth; it is getting to be even more expensive to drive a car or a truck with such a huge amount of wastage and now no one knows when alternative fuels are ready for trucks, so its possible that the most freight traffic gets relocated to railroads, because they can be powered by electricity.
My last point is, that Trucker is a very low paid job with bad conditions they drive five or six days per week and have just few days free time to spend time with families and friends so the incentive to become one is getting smaller and smaller.

So therefore I think, that the job of a trucker will disappear maybe not in the near future but it will happen.


Soooo

[robert234]

Was denn, wegen eines so kurzen Textes macht Ihr so ein Theater? :tschuess:

[Etern1ty]

Ich hab mal ne halbe Stunde an einem Dreizeiler geschrieben^^

[robert234]

Ich hab mal ne halbe Stunde an einem Dreizeiler geschrieben^^

Hast Du Dich für den Job bei der Tankstelle beworben? :mrgreen:

[Etern1ty]

Fast, Elektroingenieur ;)

[Arnie2k9]

Fast, Elektroingenieur ;)

Meinen respekt hast du, wegen Elektrotechnik wechsel ich rüber zu Wirtschaftsinformatik^^

[danni84]

Eins hab ich noch: es heißt disappearance, nich disappearing ;-)

[Etern1ty]

Mal sehen wie es wird^^ bin ja im Moment am Abi, aber ich werd mich hoffentlich reinhängen daran hängt nämlich ein ans Studium anschließender 3 Jahres Vertrag und die Aussicht auf einen Unbefristeten.